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Fanfiction: Breakfast 
24th-Jun-2009 04:57 pm
Seaking
I don't know, I like linking to my own journal for things so here's the drabble I wrote for the first week of hetalia_contest. It's cheeessssy. I hope I get at least one vote D:  In a complete tangent yay!  I finally get to use this icon! n.n

Series: Hetalia: Axis Powers ( ヘタリア Axis Powers)
Title: Breakfast W00T! I've gotten so much better at titles
Pairing/Character(s): Sweden/Finland (SuFin!), Sealand
Genre: General
Rating: G/K
Word Count: 167 (It's supposed to be a drabble and less than 300 words though so I'm okay with this)
Summary: Father's Day comes but once a year.
Notes:  I've only been writing crack lately, so here's a WAFF attempt.  I think I failed x.X

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“Wakey wakey.”

Sweden opened his eyes to see a smiling Finland and a beaming Sealand.  “Hm?”

“Happy Father’s Day Papa!  We made you breakfast in bed!”

Berwald smiled ever so slightly at the first half before visibly bristling at the second half of what his son said.

Tino immediately jumped back and started quaking in his household slippers from his husband’s expression before remembering to raise a sign in his hands that read, “Don’t worry we ordered out.”

Sweden immediately relaxed and a happy/relieved Finland kissed his sweetheart on the cheek.  “Happy Father’s Day, thank you for buying me such a great son.”

“Y’r w’lc’me,” a frightfully red Berwald replied before handing his wife a mug and digging into his breakfast.

“Speaking of buying children…” Peter, in what he hoped was a sly manner, introduced.  “When are you guys going to buy me a little sister?  I promise to take good care of her!”

Sweden spat out his scrambled eggs and Finland started choking on his coffee.

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Edits?

Comments 
25th-Jun-2009 12:48 am (UTC)
I didn't think it was awful :) It was a cute family moment...and I could so see a child like Peter choosing a time like that to ask for a younger sibling XD

And did I see a subtle hint that Peter inherited Arthur's cooking abilities?
25th-Jun-2009 01:06 am (UTC)
Lol, I'm glad you didn't think it was awful >.< Peter's comment was inspired by a SuFin doujinshi where he helped Sweden get alone time with Finland with the promise of getting a younger sister.

And yeah, of course Peter is just as terrible a cook as Arthur xP He is British >.>
25th-Jun-2009 06:19 am (UTC)
Hey there~. I'm popping over from Hetalia_contest. I just wanted to say that I loved this. I felt like I was looking at a photograph of a perfect breakfast-in-bed moment. And Sea-kun's last comment was priceless!
26th-Jun-2009 06:54 am (UTC)
Oh thank you very much! It makes me very happy to know that even one person liked it much less two! And I very much enjoyed your story too (even thought yours was sad and mine is happy D:)

Oh! And I'm glad that the last line seems to be a hit xP
27th-Jun-2009 12:08 am (UTC)
Awww, that was so adorable~! Sealand knows the perfect times to make comments, doesn't he?
29th-Jun-2009 02:20 pm (UTC)
Haha how funny! Peter inheriting Arthur's cooking abilities. And buying children. I lol'd XD

What a cute Father's Day fic! :)
6th-Sep-2009 03:42 am (UTC)
Gah, that was so cute! I like its length and the simplicity of it. It all feels so natural. Their family-dynamic is one I love to bits. Good job adding those sweet moments and equally funny bits that carefully create a believably comfortable family atmosphere. :)

Sealand you sly bastard. You got that from England, didn't you?

:)
6th-Sep-2009 03:43 am (UTC)
* family dynamic

*believable

(facepalms)
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